Competition!
Posted by Miss Berrisford on March 4, 2008
We are going to construct a story together. I will start off with a couple of sentences then to enter the competition you send in one or two sentences that you think will be good to carry on the story! Beginning next week the story will be read out in assembly. There are a lot of prizes to be won including Alien pens, bookmarks, a Secret Code book for PSP and PS2 and a Fabbity Fab journal by Louise Rennison.
The story continues throughout the week and there is no upper limit to winners, the story can be updated any time so check back often.
The Story
One fine day Alice was walking down the street dressed in her finest, most colourful clothes. Today was a special day.
(continue the story by posting comments, the ones that appear with *WINNER* will carry on the story. Check back often to see the story progress.)
Krystof Mincev said
She presumed the interview was going to go abundantly well; after all it was her fortuitous day. This was until the balmy day turned shade, and she realised that something fierce had trashed her across the head.
Well Done Krystof! You have continued the story and won yourself a prize! Now is anyone good enough to carry on this sinister tale?
Sofia said
It was a ghost, it was coming straight at her. It had a knife. The ghost sliced her eyballs out.
She died…and she went to wonderland. But Alice had a daughter and her daughter was in danger too.
Emma ..x said
Her name was Ellie. One day on her way to school she heard something calling her in a hushed crokey voice ‘ellie..elliee’ she turned around to see what it was.. noting was there.
Over the next month the same thing kept occuring… but one day…
Ainun said
She look down and saw a dark violet book with the title ‘LOSING SOULS’ in a strange but chiller type of handwriting on it. She looks around and saw people were walking but none were acting suspicious or looking at her. So she picks up the book but before she could even reach it, she has this weird feeling in her stomach like something bad was going to happen.
Enver N said
As she opened the book, there was no writing except for two words: “House Dres”. She looked up at the old tower above her. It was bleak and ruined. The same two words from the book was spray-painted on the walls of the tower. She looked as if she was going to faint…
Siana said
She decided to go in. When she opened the door the tower was empty and it looked haunted. Ellie felt scared but went in to look around,’Hellooo, is there somebody?’ she shout it. No answer. Than she saw a dusty, old door…
Enver N said
The door opened with a loud creak. There was a large hallway with a very large rectangular hole at the centre. No-one was there except for a dark figure near the hole. It made a screeching sound and fell in the hole…